Thursday, October 1, 2015

6 Word Stories


6 Word Stories by Phillip Denne

The cold hits. It comes strongly.

The bullet flies, the man dies.

Tears drop down, spirits rise up.

For christ's sake, make some pancakes!

Little boy shy, he does cry.

Boy becomes man, man named Dan.

6 comments:

  1. flies and dies. One suggests great freedom, the other, not so much.

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  2. I do like pancakes. That last one sounds like Dr. Suess dude...

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  3. The man was killed by someone else, right? Because a bullet wouldn't be flying if the man shot himself.

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  4. I like how you make a lot of these rhyme

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  5. i like how most of these rhyme! and i like how there is a different mood to each one

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